Aww, thanks! As for the long paragraphs, I totally understand about the dauntingness of the length, but they don't look quite as long not in my lj format (>___>;;) and that's kind of my style ^^;;; Still, thanks so much for the comment and the concrit, it means a lot to me!

Oh, no worries, I'm totally glad to have someone reading my fic! I wouldn't mind at all~ In fact, I'm flattered. Just don't be too turned off by posts about life and general spamming of your flists. XD;